Tips and tricks for 
writing effective InMails
Overview 
• Common Pitfalls 
• Best Practices 
• Top Tips 
• Resources
Common InMail pitfalls 
We give them way too much 
information! 
They may opt out before ever speaking 
with us. 
§ Think of it as your elevator pitch 
§ Cut out the details and job description 
§ Don’t write below the fold
Common InMail pitfalls 
We make it all about us! 
Prospects should feel special, not like 
they have to do you a favor. 
• Make it about them 
• Tell them what they’ll get out of the 
conversation
Common InMail pitfalls 
We make the prospect feel like a 
number. 
This message is an obvious template – 
nothing personalized, nothing to grab 
attention.
InMail on mobile 
Prospects are on the go! 
Make that message short but impactful.
Two strong adjectives to 
describe the opportunity 
What is the most important thing 
the person will accomplish? 
What is the role? 
Describe your company 
highlighting what makes you 
stand out from your competitors 
What are the top qualities your 
ideal candidate will have?
Personalization is just a filter away… 
FOLLOWERS are 81% more likely to 
respond to your InMail 
SCHOOL: Call out commonalities, like school, 
between you and the prospect 
GROUPS: Join groups relevant to your talent 
pool – group members are 21% more likely to 
respond 
WHEN JOINED: New members are more 
likely to respond
Making it easier 
Use LinkedIn’s 
recommendations on: 
• People in common 
• Groups in common 
• Education in common 
• Experience in common 
to personalize your 
message
Top InMail tips 
This is what I can do for you! 
A targeted approach makes the 
prospect feel special.
Top InMail tips 
Don’t hide the hook. 
Let the prospect know right away 
what’s great about your company and 
the opportunity.
Top InMail tips 
Make it enticing to get back to you. 
InMail is just an initial contact, not the 
sales pitch or the prescreen.
Strategic InMail template types 
Let’s connect! 
Networking 
Company followers 
Expertise request 
Groups & shared memberships 
Referrals
Takeaways 
• What is in it for them? 
• Why should they read an InMail from someone 
they don’t know? 
• Good research makes a great InMail 
• Spend time upfront and enjoy high Response 
Rates 
• Mobile Mobile Mobile 
• 60% of messages are read on mobile first. Is your 
message mobile-friendly?
Learn more …
Learning Center 
30 resources in 10 languages … and growing!
InMail playbook 
Available in the Learning Center or on SlideShare
LinkedIn Talent Blog 
http://talent.linkedin.com/blog

Tips & Tricks on Writing Effective InMails | Webcast

  • 1.
    Tips and tricksfor writing effective InMails
  • 2.
    Overview • CommonPitfalls • Best Practices • Top Tips • Resources
  • 3.
    Common InMail pitfalls We give them way too much information! They may opt out before ever speaking with us. § Think of it as your elevator pitch § Cut out the details and job description § Don’t write below the fold
  • 4.
    Common InMail pitfalls We make it all about us! Prospects should feel special, not like they have to do you a favor. • Make it about them • Tell them what they’ll get out of the conversation
  • 5.
    Common InMail pitfalls We make the prospect feel like a number. This message is an obvious template – nothing personalized, nothing to grab attention.
  • 6.
    InMail on mobile Prospects are on the go! Make that message short but impactful.
  • 7.
    Two strong adjectivesto describe the opportunity What is the most important thing the person will accomplish? What is the role? Describe your company highlighting what makes you stand out from your competitors What are the top qualities your ideal candidate will have?
  • 8.
    Personalization is justa filter away… FOLLOWERS are 81% more likely to respond to your InMail SCHOOL: Call out commonalities, like school, between you and the prospect GROUPS: Join groups relevant to your talent pool – group members are 21% more likely to respond WHEN JOINED: New members are more likely to respond
  • 9.
    Making it easier Use LinkedIn’s recommendations on: • People in common • Groups in common • Education in common • Experience in common to personalize your message
  • 10.
    Top InMail tips This is what I can do for you! A targeted approach makes the prospect feel special.
  • 11.
    Top InMail tips Don’t hide the hook. Let the prospect know right away what’s great about your company and the opportunity.
  • 12.
    Top InMail tips Make it enticing to get back to you. InMail is just an initial contact, not the sales pitch or the prescreen.
  • 13.
    Strategic InMail templatetypes Let’s connect! Networking Company followers Expertise request Groups & shared memberships Referrals
  • 14.
    Takeaways • Whatis in it for them? • Why should they read an InMail from someone they don’t know? • Good research makes a great InMail • Spend time upfront and enjoy high Response Rates • Mobile Mobile Mobile • 60% of messages are read on mobile first. Is your message mobile-friendly?
  • 15.
  • 16.
    Learning Center 30resources in 10 languages … and growing!
  • 17.
    InMail playbook Availablein the Learning Center or on SlideShare
  • 18.
    LinkedIn Talent Blog http://talent.linkedin.com/blog