Writing Copy That Drives Action During Promotions

Want your words to actually sell? Here’s a simple roadmap I've found incredibly helpful: Think of crafting your message like taking someone on a mini-journey: 1. Hook them with curiosity: Your headline is the first "hello."  Make it intriguing enough to stop the scroll.  Instead of just saying "Email Marketing Tips," try something like "Want a 20% revenue jump in the next 60 days? (Here's the email secret)."  See the difference? Promise + Specificity = Attention. 2. Tell a story with a villain: This might sound dramatic, but hear me out.  What's the problem your audience is facing?  What's the frustration, the obstacle, the "enemy" they're battling?  For the email example, maybe it's "wasting hours on emails that no one opens."  Giving that problem a name creates an instant connection and a sense of purpose for your solution. 3. Handle the "yeah, but..." in their head: We all have those internal objections.  "I don't have time," "It costs too much," "Will it even work for me?"  Great copy anticipates these doubts and addresses them head-on within the message. 4. Show, don't just tell (Proof!): People are naturally skeptical.  Instead of just saying "it works," show them.  Even a simple "Join thousands of others who've seen real results" adds weight. Testimonials, even short ones, are gold. 5. Make it crystal clear what you want them to do (CTA):   Don't leave them guessing!  "Learn the exact steps in my latest guide" or "Grab your free checklist now" are direct and tell them exactly what to do and what they'll get.  Notice the benefit in the CTA example: "Get sculpted abs in just 4 weeks without dieting." And when you're thinking about where you're sharing this (LinkedIn post, email, etc.), there are different ways to structure your message. The P-A-S (Problem-Agitate-Solution) or A-I-D-A (Attention-Interest-Desire-Action) frameworks are classics for a reason. The core difference I've learned? Good copywriting isn't about shouting about your amazing product. It's about understanding them – their challenges, their desires – and positioning your solution as the answer in a way that feels like a conversation, not a sales pitch.

I spent 10+ hours learning to write stronger calls to action this week. 14 concepts I plan to use: 👉 1. Call to Action vs. Call to Value A call to action is for people ready to buy - keep it as simple as possible. A call to value reminds the prospect of the great outcome they're going to get. 👉 2. Use the phrase "I want to ____" in your button or link copy. Fill in the blank with a desired outcome. THIS: "I want to grow my business" NOT: "Download it now" 👉 3. Use the word "show" THIS: "Show me outfits I'll love" NOT: "Sign up now" That's a real example where the change resulted in 123% more clicks. 👉 4. Use first person language on buttons. THIS: "I want to double my revenue" NOT: "Double your revenue" 👉 5. Think of links as a door. People don't know what's on the other side so it's scary to click. Make it less scary for them. 👉 6. Focus on ONE action. Don't compete with your own CTA by making multiple asks. 👉 7. Lead with action verbs. THIS: "Unlock your marketing potential and download our free strategy guide" NOT: "Download our guide" 👉 8. Use an "If" statement. Weave a specific problem and solution into your CTA. Example: "If you're ready to maximize your profit and grow to 50k months working part-time hours, book a call with me to discuss what next steps would look like for you." 👉 9. Avoid generic phrases. Your CTA should work even if there was no other copy around it. Don't settle for "Click here," "Download now," "Submit," etc. 👉 10. Avoid hesitant language. Be more confident than "Let me know if you want it" or "If you need me..." 👉 11. No jargon or vague language. Address a specific problem using language your target audience uses. Don't say stuff like: "If you want to live your best life and step into your full potential..." 👉 12. No negative language. THIS: "Are you ready to lose 10-25 pounds of that menopause weight?" NOT: "Are you struggling to lose weight with menopause?" 👉 13. Write your CTA before you write anything else. It gives you a north star to guide the rest of your writing. 👉 14. Make sure your CTA includes two things: ✅ Why they should act ✅ Why they should do it NOW Want more useful tips like these? This week on LinkedIn I'll share: • How I turn newsletter subscribers into buyers • A formula you can use to strengthen your niche • How I'm growing my LinkedIn following 👉 Follow me and hit the 🔔 at the top right of my profile to turn on notifications so you don't miss those posts. Thanks for your interest!

Ads that sell aren’t born, they’re built. Here’s how top copywriters do it. 💡 Great copywriting isn’t luck—it’s structure. Here are 7 timeless copywriting formulas to transform your ads into conversion machines: 1️⃣ AIDA: Attention → Interest → Desire → Action 🔑 Start strong to grab attention, build curiosity, create emotional desire, and finish with a compelling call-to-action (CTA). 💬 Example: "Struggling with slow mornings? Our coffee gives you 20 minutes back each day. That’s time for your kids, your workout, or just you. Start your day smarter—try it today!" 2️⃣ PAS: Problem → Agitation → Solution 🔑 Spotlight your customer’s pain point, intensify the discomfort, then swoop in with your solution. 💬 Example: "Can’t sleep through the night? Tossing and turning drains your energy and focus. Our mattress is clinically proven to help you sleep better—starting tonight." 3️⃣ 4Cs: Clear → Concise → Compelling → Credible 🔑 Deliver a simple, emotionally engaging, and evidence-backed message. 💬 Example: "Fast delivery. Free next-day shipping. Shop today, get it tomorrow. Rated 5 stars by 1M+ happy customers." 4️⃣ FAB: Features → Advantages → Benefits 🔑 Show what your product does, why it’s superior, and how it changes your customer’s life. 💬 Example: "Noise-canceling headphones → Blocks 95% of background noise → Enjoy focus like never before, even in the busiest spaces." 5️⃣ Before-After-Bridge 🔑 Paint the "before" struggle, highlight the "after" transformation, and position your product as the bridge to success. 💬 Example: "Before: Hours wasted planning social media content. After: Daily posts driving consistent engagement and leads. Bridge: With our AI-powered scheduler, posting is stress-free." 6️⃣ Problem-Solution Formula 🔑 Keep it ultra-simple—present the problem, then solve it. 💬 Example: "Finding healthy snacks is hard. Our organic snack box delivers guilt-free treats right to your door." 7️⃣ The “So What?” Test 🔑 Answer "Why does this matter?" until your copy resonates deeply with your audience. 💬 Example: "Feature: Waterproof jacket. So what? You stay dry. So what? You can enjoy every outdoor adventure without worry." Don’t just write ads. Create impact. Start using these formulas today. 🚀 Take Action Now: 1️⃣ Save this post to master these frameworks whenever you need. 2️⃣ Share it with your team to elevate your marketing game together. 3️⃣ Follow Tom Wanek for more strategies that turn words into results.

Here’s why your offers aren’t getting the attention they deserve. It’s not because your product isn’t good enough. It’s because your message isn’t landing. Most businesses focus too much on what they’re selling. But here’s the secret: It’s not about your product—it’s about your customer. What’s in it for them? How will it make their life easier, better, or more exciting? Your copy should be so clear, so compelling, that your audience feels like you just get them. Here’s how you make your offers irresistible: 1) Lead with emotions, close with logic. People buy with their feelings first. Then they justify it with facts. 2) Speak their language. Skip the jargon. Use the words your customers would use to describe their problems and dreams. 3) Highlight the transformation. Don’t just tell them what your product does—show them how it will change their life. 4) Create urgency. No one moves without a reason. Give them a reason to act now. 5) Remove the risk. Make saying “yes” feel easy. Offer guarantees or risk-free trials. And remember: Good copy isn’t about being clever. It’s about being clear. It’s about showing your audience why your offer is exactly what they need—and nothing less. What’s your biggest challenge when it comes to writing copy? Let’s chat in the comments 👇

"Why doesn't my landing page convert?" Here's why 👇 An empty page with a form will not cut it for most buyers. You need to earn their purchase. To do so, you must bring them through these 5 steps before they convert. 1] 𝗠𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗬𝗼𝘂 𝗗𝗼 𝗜𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗹𝘆 𝗞𝗻𝗼𝘄𝗻 Make it clear what you do, who you serve, and how you make lives better. Have a visual that continues the message and brings in attention. Headline Formula: [What You Do] + [Outcome] Headline Example: Unlimited Copywriting That Converts Subheadline Formula: We help [Audience] + [Value Prop 1], [Value Prop 2], [Value Prop 3], with [What You Do] Subheadline Example: We helped B2B SaaS companies lower staff costs, go to market faster, and convert more demos with unlimited copywriting. 2] 𝗗𝗲𝗺𝗼𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗿𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝗘𝗺𝗽𝗮𝘁𝗵𝘆 Customers want to feel seen. Make it clear you understand where they are and what they deserve. Empathy Headline Formula: [Question] + [Deep Rooted Concern] Empathy Headline Example: Do you have an amazing product but struggle to communicate it's true value? Empathy Subheadline Example: Every word on your website is an opportunity to connect with your ideal customer. Finding the right combination of trust, education, and pulsation with your copy is no easy task. You need the right partner to help guide you to a copy strategy that will resonate with your ideal customer. 3] 𝗕𝘂𝗶𝗹𝗱 𝗧𝗿𝘂𝘀𝘁 Customers need to feel comfortable working with you. You need proof. Your landing page should include: – Testimonials – Case Studies – Client Logos – Press Logos – Data Use these to your advantage to back up claims. Don't leave them isolated to a single section. 4] 𝗦𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗔𝘂𝘁𝗵𝗼𝗿𝗶𝘁𝘆 Make it obvious why you're the right choice. Communicate how you've solved these problems for people just like them. Authority Formula: We Help [Customer Industry] + [Path Forward] Authority Example: We help B2B SaaS companies write copy that communicates their value and prompts action. We helped [Client Name] lift their demo requests by [Specific Value] by re-writing their homepage. Check out the full case study. 5] 𝗠𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗡𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝗦𝘁𝗲𝗽𝘀 𝗖𝗿𝘆𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗹 𝗖𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗿 Not only should you make it crystal clear what the next step is, make it known what the cost of inaction is. Action Headline Formula: [Value] + Starts Now Action Headline Example: Your path to better copy starts now Inaction Examples: You lose opportunities every time a customer fails to resonate with your copy. Stop wasting time and ad budget on bad copy. --- Want a high-resolution PDF version of this lesson? Comment "LANDING PAGE LIFT"