Crafting Engaging Landing Page Copy

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Summary

Crafting engaging landing page copy is the art of creating clear, concise, and compelling text that captures attention, builds trust, and drives visitors to take action. By focusing on the user’s needs and presenting a clear path forward, you can transform your landing page into a powerful tool for conversions.

  • Create a single focus: Streamline your message by eliminating distractions and presenting one clear call-to-action (CTA) to guide users toward their next step.
  • Offer tangible value: Use transformation-driven headlines, empowering visuals, and relatable stories to show visitors how your solution can improve their lives.
  • Build trust visually: Incorporate testimonials, case studies, or high-quality mockups to make your offer credible and relatable while inspiring confidence in your audience.
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  • View profile for Daniel Bustamante 🥷🏻

    💰 Million-dollar email marketing prompts, tactics, & strategies for LinkedIn/X creators | Email wizard at Premium Ghostwriting Academy ($5M/year revenue)

    29,665 followers

    After building 100+ lead magnet landing pages, I've found 7 non-negotiable rules to maximize conversion rates. Let's break them down: RULE 1: The Rule of 1 There's only ONE thing you can do on my landing pages: Opt-in or bounce. There's no navigation bars, blog archives, social media buttons... NADA. All of these are distractions. And distractions = lower opt-in rates. So if you want to increase your opt-in rates, the first thing you should do is follow The Rule of 1—just one CTA. RULE 2: Transformation-Driven Headline If you're reading this, you've probably heard the famous Ogilvy quote before: “On the average, five times as many people read the headline as read the body copy. When you have written your headline, you have spent eighty cents out of your dollar.” Now, even though he said that decades ago (and in the context of paid advertising), this is still true. And it also applies to lead magnet landing pages. But, how do you write a great landing page headline? There's dozens of small nuances—but none of them matter if your headline doesn't promise a tangible & compelling outcome (or transformation). So, keep that in mind next time you're writing a landing page. RULE 3: Objection Busting Now, sometimes making a good promise isn't enough. People have doubts. So, if you want maximize your opt-in rates, make sure to always include an Objection Busting sentence to the end of your headlines. Pro tip: Use smaller font size & italicize your Objection Busting sentence so your "main" headline doesn't get too bulky. RULE 4: Mockup image One of your main goals when creating a landing page like this? To make your lead magnet feel *tangible.* Even make it feel like a product. That's why all of my landing pages always have a high-quality mockup image. Obviously, you can whip up your own mockup images using a tool like Canva. But if you can hire a designer to help you create one, that's even better. (It's worth every penny!) RULE 5: Compelling Lead Magnet Name Another way to make your lead magnets feel more tangible? Name them something! One of my favorite frameworks for this is Hormozi's MAGIC formula. RULE 6: Tangible Social Proof As we all know, social proof is extremely powerful. Now, when you have limited real estate, one of my favorite ways to add social proof is to add a short blurb with *tangible* social proof. (Instead of adding a "quote testimonial.") See the image below for an example of this! RULE 7: Opt-In Form Above The Fold Lastly, you want to make it as easy as possible for people to opt-in for your lead magnet. And easy means NO scrolling. That's why your opt-in box should always be "above the fold." Pro tip: Check the mobile version of your page to ensure the opt-in box is above the fold there too. And that's it! Now, the question is - which of these rules are you implementing first?

  • View profile for Apryl Syed

    CEO | Growth & Innovation Strategist | Scaling Startups to Exits | Angel Investor | Board Advisor | Mentor

    15,219 followers

    Great Landing Pages: Making Your Customer the Hero 🌟 "Good marketing makes the company look smart. Great marketing makes the customer feel smart.” – Joe Chernov Great landing pages do more than just sell; they make your customer the hero of their journey. Here’s how to craft landing pages that empower and resonate with your audience: 1. Clear Value Proposition Focus on what the customer can achieve with your help. Make them the central figure in your story. 2. Empowering Visuals Use images and videos that show customers overcoming challenges and achieving their goals with your product. 3. Engaging Content Tell a relatable story that mirrors your customer's journey. Speak directly to their experiences and aspirations. 4. Persuasive CTAs Encourage action with benefits-oriented language. Think “Start Your Journey to Success” instead of “Sign Up Now.” 5. Trust and Credibility Feature testimonials and case studies to build trust. Let customers see themselves in these success stories. 6. Seamless UX Ensure your page is easy to navigate, loads quickly, and is mobile-optimized. A smooth experience keeps the focus on the customer’s journey. Make Your Customer the Hero Effective landing pages make customers feel smart, capable, and empowered. By positioning them as the hero, you enhance their experience and boost conversions. Ready to turn your customers into heroes? Let’s connect and transform your landing pages today! #DigitalMarketing #CustomerJourney #LandingPageOptimization #MarketingStrategy #CustomerFirst

  • View profile for Jeff Gapinski

    CMO & Founder @ Huemor ⟡ We build memorable websites for construction, engineering, manufacturing, and technology companies ⟡ [DM “Review” For A Free Website Review]

    42,527 followers

    "Why doesn't my landing page convert?" Here's why 👇 An empty page with a form will not cut it for most buyers. You need to earn their purchase. To do so, you must bring them through these 5 steps before they convert. 1] 𝗠𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗬𝗼𝘂 𝗗𝗼 𝗜𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗹𝘆 𝗞𝗻𝗼𝘄𝗻 Make it clear what you do, who you serve, and how you make lives better. Have a visual that continues the message and brings in attention. Headline Formula: [What You Do] + [Outcome] Headline Example: Unlimited Copywriting That Converts Subheadline Formula: We help [Audience] + [Value Prop 1], [Value Prop 2], [Value Prop 3], with [What You Do] Subheadline Example: We helped B2B SaaS companies lower staff costs, go to market faster, and convert more demos with unlimited copywriting. 2] 𝗗𝗲𝗺𝗼𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗿𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝗘𝗺𝗽𝗮𝘁𝗵𝘆 Customers want to feel seen. Make it clear you understand where they are and what they deserve. Empathy Headline Formula: [Question] + [Deep Rooted Concern] Empathy Headline Example: Do you have an amazing product but struggle to communicate it's true value? Empathy Subheadline Example: Every word on your website is an opportunity to connect with your ideal customer. Finding the right combination of trust, education, and pulsation with your copy is no easy task. You need the right partner to help guide you to a copy strategy that will resonate with your ideal customer. 3] 𝗕𝘂𝗶𝗹𝗱 𝗧𝗿𝘂𝘀𝘁 Customers need to feel comfortable working with you. You need proof. Your landing page should include: – Testimonials – Case Studies – Client Logos – Press Logos – Data Use these to your advantage to back up claims. Don't leave them isolated to a single section. 4] 𝗦𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗔𝘂𝘁𝗵𝗼𝗿𝗶𝘁𝘆 Make it obvious why you're the right choice. Communicate how you've solved these problems for people just like them. Authority Formula: We Help [Customer Industry] + [Path Forward] Authority Example: We help B2B SaaS companies write copy that communicates their value and prompts action. We helped [Client Name] lift their demo requests by [Specific Value] by re-writing their homepage. Check out the full case study. 5] 𝗠𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗡𝗲𝘅𝘁 𝗦𝘁𝗲𝗽𝘀 𝗖𝗿𝘆𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗹 𝗖𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗿 Not only should you make it crystal clear what the next step is, make it known what the cost of inaction is. Action Headline Formula: [Value] + Starts Now Action Headline Example: Your path to better copy starts now Inaction Examples: You lose opportunities every time a customer fails to resonate with your copy. Stop wasting time and ad budget on bad copy. --- Want a high-resolution PDF version of this lesson? Comment "LANDING PAGE LIFT"

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