Writing Clear Emails for Remote Communication

I was a Chief Customer Officer by 29 (and a millionaire by 30) I joined Buddy Media at 26 as a project manager In 3 years, I ran a 100-person team In 4 years, we sold the company for $745M I became a millionaire in the process The # 1 factor in my success? Clear communication! (yes, it’s that simple) I get 20-50 terrible emails a day. - They ramble. - They bury the lead. - They’re unclear on the ask. - They use jargon to look smart. - They want me to do all the work. And they wonder why their career is stuck.  (spoiler: you’re a bad communicator) (and it’s hurting your career) Here’s how to fix it. 👇 And write perfect emails to your boss. 1. Main Point First   → Open with your key message or ask.   Bad: Rambling intro   Good: “Sales are up 15%. I need approval to expand ads.”     2. Context Second   → Give brief, relevant data after your point.  *Bad: Long backstory   Good: “North up 20%, South down 10%.”     3. Be Specific   → Propose a solution and make a clear ask.   Bad: “What do you think?”   Good: “Can we launch the campaign tomorrow?”     4. Use Bullets   → Break complex info into bullets.   Bad: Dense paragraph   Good: 3-line bullet list showing key trends     5. Anticipate Questions   → Answer what your manager will likely ask.   Bad: Let me know if you have questions   Good: “Attached is the South region breakdown.”     6. Respect Their Time   → Keep it tight. Don’t default to a meeting.   Bad: Long-winded, multiple long paragraphs   Good: “Summary below. Happy to meet if needed.”     It seems so simple. And the good news? It IS simple. Yet, most employees pull up a blank email and start spewing. Then wonder why they're stuck. Don’t be one of them. Tighten up your communication. And watch your career take off! 🚀 P.S. How many bad emails do you get per day?

𝗘𝗺𝗮𝗶𝗹 𝗖𝗹𝗮𝗿𝗶𝘁𝘆 = 𝗧𝗲𝗮𝗺 𝗖𝗹𝗮𝗿𝗶𝘁𝘆 (𝗘𝘀𝗽𝗲𝗰𝗶𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 𝗶𝗻 𝗥𝗲𝗺𝗼𝘁𝗲 𝗧𝗲𝗮𝗺𝘀) “I thought the message was clear.” But then I’d get: • 3 follow-up emails. • 2 missed deadlines. • And 1 frustrated teammate. If you’ve ever led a remote team, you know: 📧 Miscommunication isn't about laziness— It’s about ambiguity. 𝗔𝗻𝗱 𝗲𝗺𝗮𝗶𝗹 𝗶𝘀 𝗼𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝗶𝗹𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗰𝘂𝗹𝗽𝗿𝗶𝘁. Over the years of coaching executives, here’s what I’ve noticed: The best leaders don’t just send messages. They design communication for clarity, structure, and emotional connection. 𝗛𝗲𝗿𝗲’𝘀 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝘁𝗼 𝗱𝗼 𝗶𝘁 👇 (I broke it down in the infographic attached.) 🔎 𝟯 𝗦𝗺𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝗦𝗵𝗶𝗳𝘁𝘀 𝗧𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗣𝗿𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗕𝗶𝗴 𝗥𝗲𝗺𝗼𝘁𝗲 𝗠𝗶𝘀𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗺𝘂𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻𝘀: 💡 𝟭. 𝗖𝗹𝗮𝗿𝗶𝘁𝘆 – 𝗖𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗿 𝘀𝘂𝗯𝗷𝗲𝗰𝘁 𝗹𝗶𝗻𝗲𝘀 → 𝗦𝘁𝗼𝗽 𝘂𝘀𝗶𝗻𝗴: “Quick update” or “Touching base” → 𝗦𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁 𝘂𝘀𝗶𝗻𝗴: “Client Feedback Needed by EOD” or “Budget Review: Final Draft Approval” 💡 𝟮. 𝗦𝘁𝗿𝘂𝗰𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗲 – 𝗢𝗿𝗴𝗮𝗻𝗶𝘇𝗲𝗱 𝗺𝗲𝘀𝘀𝗮𝗴𝗲 𝗯𝗼𝗱𝘆 → Use bullet points, bold key dates, and keep paragraphs short → Structure builds speed—especially for teams juggling multiple threads 💡 𝟯. 𝗖𝗼𝗻𝗻𝗲𝗰𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻 – 𝗥𝗶𝗴𝗵𝘁 𝘁𝗼𝗻𝗲 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘁𝗲𝘅𝘁 → Add warmth and context: “𝘏𝘰𝘱𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶’𝘳𝘦 𝘸𝘦𝘭𝘭” + “𝘈𝘴 𝘥𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘶𝘴𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘴𝘵 𝘸𝘦𝘦𝘬’𝘴 𝘴𝘺𝘯𝘤…” → It’s not fluff—it’s trust-building. 📊 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝘀𝘂𝗹𝘁? ✅ Fewer back-and-forths ✅ Faster decisions ✅ A team that feels informed, respected, and aligned 👋 If you’re leading a remote or hybrid team, and you're tired of the fog that comes with virtual communication… This is where real leadership shows up—not in more emails, but better ones. — 🧠 𝗪𝗮𝗻𝘁 𝘁𝗼 𝗴𝗼 𝗱𝗲𝗲𝗽𝗲𝗿? Subscribe to my free newsletter and get the full DNA of Influence™ framework— A proven system to boost executive presence, influence, and clarity in any room (or Zoom). 🔗 [Link In The Comment Section] #leadership #peakimpactmentorship  #communication #remotework #dnaofinfluence #emailtips

In my 14yrs career in engineering working for Big Tech companies such as Google and Uber, there is no other skill I used more than writing. And no, I don’t mean writing code. I mean English writing. Emails, Design Docs, Presentations, Feedback, Code Reviews, you name it. Here's how I make my written communication clear, effective, and punchy. 👇 Written communication can sometimes be daunting, especially for non-native speakers—like me. That’s why I wanted to share  the 6 questions that I use when writing anything. This helps me communicate more effectively and connect with my audience better. 1. Who is my target audience? Identify the specific group or individuals you are speaking to. Knowing your audience assists you in customizing your writing to meet their requirements and interests. 2. What is my main objective or purpose? Clarify the primary goal of your writing. Whether it's to inform, persuade, entertain, or educate, knowing your objective guides your content. 3. What key points do I want to convey? Identify the main idea or key points you want to communicate. This will help you stay focused and make sure your message is clear and logical. 4. Why should the reader care about this? Consider the value or benefit your writing offers to the reader. Highlight how it addresses their needs or solves a problem. 5. Is my writing clear, concise, and organized? Make sure your content is clear and easy to understand. Keep the flow logical and avoid using complex language or jargon that might confuse the reader. 6. Can I make my writing shorter? The answer is always yes. So make sure to edit edit edit. Brevity saves time for both the writer and the reader. What else would you add to this list? How does your writing process look like? ♻️ Please repost if you found this useful